Monday, January 18, 2010

RaNdOm ViChAaR ?!?

Udhaar ki zindagi

kiraye ka makaan

packet bhar umeed

or soch ki udaan


muskurati aankhein

gungunate honth

pehli barish

or wo pehli chot


thandi si dhup

or chilchilati sardi

khuli khuli raahein

or local ki gardi

Appraisal ka tension

rishtedaron ka vaar

mummy daddy ko chadha

meri shaadi ka bukhar


kuch sacchi si baatein

kuch random se shabd

ye maine likhe hain

main bhi hu stabdh

7 comments:

Unknown said...

hmm seems awakening of writer... gud writing

Aadi said...

Though it might seem random at first and by the title of the post, I feel it's anything but random...True thoughts from inside...wonderful poem...

Jayashree said...

@Virat @Aadi Thanks :)

Avatar said...

The begining of a new Generation Poet...Nice thoughts and a beautiful imagination...Looking forward for more :)
Cheers to life!

Razzer said...

Nice. I like. :-) More to come?

manu said...

huuuuummmm
nice to explain mum the dream city nd v the ppl

Jitendra Singh said...

I love this poem, the words are superb....Believe me we will print a book over all your poems.

You are good writer and a beautiful thinker, the way you have put your words in it is awesome.